Vercetti is THE symbol for the GTA series and not to mention the coolest of the 'criminal' Head Characters. (you know, from CJ on up, most of the main characters changed from 'ambitious criminals' to just people with a dream/looking out for themselves)
Excellent draw, but I agree a little bit...It'd be hard to give him a background/environment that'd do him justice.
Even though your not that happy with it, i think its very good pat , looks very similar to the early rockstar concept sketches of Tommy Vercetti
and i agree, total LEGEND, best GTA character i think, wasnt so keen on claude, CJ or Niko Bellic. Johnny from the GTA 4 expansion was pretty cool though, that expansion reminded me alot of the Sons of Anarchy