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But I'm going to be honest cause that's what I would want.
Although this is very well done, it does have issues.
-Lets start with the light. It's clearly coming from behind Lara, but there are no dark shadows on her at all to indicate this. And no light source in the foreground to brighten them as would be expected.
-I believe the lack of dark shading causes the next issue. The image (Lara) is VERY flat. You've added textures but they seem simply slapped on. There's no deform to the blood at all. They should be shaped with the form of the body/clothing.
-Lara seems to moving forward but her hair and necklace (controlled by inertia and gravity) are traveling in the same direction as the character when they should be going in the opposite direction.
-And lastly, What is holding her climbing axe on? I think this bugs me the most. It's just floating there!
Other then that, I love it. Really love that background.