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November 23, 2010
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Darkness Within Concepts by PatrickBrown Darkness Within Concepts by PatrickBrown
I've been messing around with my character again haha! This time I wanted to see what he'd look like if he had shorter hair and was a bit LESS buff haha! I think this will make him more realistic, every superhero you see these days is super buff and wears tights... So I'm going with a casual kind of super dude ;) Little bit emo maybe :)

I'd love to hear some thoughts.. I really want to get my character locked in and ready so I can try and start my first comic!

Here's my previous concepts:

I'm still going to add some sort of tattoo to the new version, you just can't see it in the sketch haha!

Let me know what you think :D
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BearTrack Featured By Owner Edited 1 day ago  Student Traditional Artist
I am so in love with this character design...I only wish I had thought of it first :D  His whole anatomy (this version) is just so satisfying to look at, but maybe that's just because I'm partial to lean muscular types. I also think the legs are just right, not too skinny.
UntoldPromises Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2014  Student Digital Artist
Looks kinda like Chuck Norris teehee.
I love it! :D
paradeofzombies Featured By Owner May 8, 2013  Student Digital Artist
I really like the fact that the legs are a bit "too skinny", as someone said. I think it makes the style more interesting and creative ;D really awesome, love the expressions as well!
MooreCreativity Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2012
just to clarify I just think the legs are a little too skinny...they don't necessarily need to be buff just thicker
MooreCreativity Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2012
I like that you went with a little less buff than most, but the legs need to be a little more buff than they are now if you want them to balance with them arms...just my two cents
tjhasley Featured By Owner Oct 2, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I really like your style
maclvr2312 Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
well i like it :)
bayoneth Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2012  Professional General Artist
incredible! simply incredible! :)
EpicRoyalty Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2012  Student Artist
i love ur artwork style Pat! u rock!! :headbang:
CUSTOMgOD Featured By Owner May 10, 2012
Do you do commission work.
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