I love a good Jim Carrey movie, and lately me and my girlfriend thought we'd watch Ace Ventura again, just for a laugh. I forgot how good it was "LIKE A GLOVE!!!"
Anyways I'm still trying to get this new technique to a good stage, my Uncharted 3 pic is still on hold but only because I can't decide if I want to use this kind of thing for detailing or my usual style.. I'm thinking this but with my usual thick outlines to give it that edgy feel.
To start with I don't think this rating system works on a piece like this, the only 2 that really count are Technique and Impact in this case. So only take those two into account.
The hairline feels just a little too sharp against his forehead in the shadowed area. The large hairline dip in the hairstyle makes the shape of his hair look quite 2-dimentional. Also would have been nice to have a strand or 2 loose just to keep it from all looking like one block of hair.
The floral pattern doesn't interact well with the value on the shirt, it looks like you first put down the pattern and then did the value straight over, and the problem now is that the wrinkles in the shirt look like they're part of the pattern. If you would have used a darker/lighter brush with more transparency it would have kept the light and shadow looking like light and shadow. Also give it an attribute like burn or similar to keep from losing the saturation. Or you could have done the lighting on a separate layer and played around with blending the two to keep the difference between the floral pattern and value obvious.
Last of all, for more impact you could of had him lock eyes with the viewer.
btw, I think it's great.. brilliant capture of jim carrey
Me gusta esto, así como sus otros trabajos. Es una buena representación de Ace el color de mezcla y aparece fuera al mismo tiempo y el rostro realmente capturas de Jim Carrey, pero sentí que el fondo es de Llano. Puede ser su intención. una pieza de arte fresca en general.
"I like this as well as your other work. It is a good representation of Ace the color blends and pops out at the same time and the face truly captures Jim Carrey, but I felt that the background is to plain. That may be your intention though. overall a cool piece of art."
The hairline feels just a little too sharp against his forehead in the shadowed area. The large hairline dip in the hairstyle makes the shape of his hair look quite 2-dimentional. Also would have been nice to have a strand or 2 loose just to keep it from all looking like one block of hair.
The floral pattern doesn't interact well with the value on the shirt, it looks like you first put down the pattern and then did the value straight over, and the problem now is that the wrinkles in the shirt look like they're part of the pattern. If you would have used a darker/lighter brush with more transparency it would have kept the light and shadow looking like light and shadow. Also give it an attribute like burn or similar to keep from losing the saturation. Or you could have done the lighting on a separate layer and played around with blending the two to keep the difference between the floral pattern and value obvious.
Last of all, for more impact you could of had him lock eyes with the viewer.
btw, I think it's great.. brilliant capture of jim carrey
"I like this as well as your other work. It is a good representation of Ace the color blends and pops out at the same time and the face truly captures Jim Carrey, but I felt that the background is to plain. That may be your intention though. overall a cool piece of art."
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